Popsicle Plop

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When I tried to lick an icy pop, When bike riding, with two-up on top. I screamed and you squealed As ice cream, revealed Two riders fly head over heels plop

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2023 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/22/2023 6:31:00 PM

That's why you should never eat and drive or ride etc. Ha! Ha! Congrats on your win, John! Blessings, Kim M

John Anderson
Date: 7/22/2023 6:44:00 PM

Thanks very much for your comment. All the best.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/22/2023 4:48:00 PM

John, congratulations on your winning placement, I enjoyed your creative limerick!

John Anderson
Date: 7/22/2023 5:27:00 PM

Thanks a lot Cheers

David Fisher

Date: 7/14/2023 5:32:00 PM

Funny limerick...easy to picture it.

John Anderson
Date: 7/14/2023 6:18:00 PM

thanks, cheers. It was a play on the game of two-up but probably no one gets it. Any thanks for coming in by, Cheers,