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with whispers she makes shadows all hold hands the West wind turns it's back at her command. With one cold glance the daisies lose their leaves she holds nature in her thrall, she believes. Making potions in a jar to made-up tunes, telling fortunes using Lego bricks for runes. Poppy says she's had the gift since she was ten, Mum hopes she'll grow out of it, who knows when. With crystals, string, a map and twigs for rods she finds lost things, assisted by the Gods. A hair grip that she wore when she was three and a boiled sweet down the back of the settee. Buoyed by this success, she moved out to the fields to see what her divining skills could yield. Dry leaves sighed with every step she made, the rods directing Poppy through the glade when a hand took hold her ankle from the ground from something that did not want to be found. Faded posters on the lamp posts now replaced with another set that feature Poppy's face. Two missing girls, the same town, in five years, children play behind locked gates amidst their fears 'till father time puts all of this behind them, but Lucy says she has a gift- and she can find them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/29/2015 6:35:00 AM
Very dark, quite chilling the ending. Is Lucy to be next? Sometimes its best not to seek evil out unless one has the power to vanquish it. Brilliant and highly creative write my friend! A super 7 from me..
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Date: 5/29/2015 7:14:00 AM
Thanks, Robert. Leaving endings open is very powerful. Thanks for the 7. Regards, Viv
Date: 5/25/2015 2:14:00 AM
I liked the almost haunted feel at the start, Viv. Almost chilling, and I say that respectfully because way back in my early college days I did the Quija board thing once and got the dickens scared out of me. Your poem ends up being about hope instead. Bravo.
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:30:00 AM
Likewise, Brian, with the board. a group of us had a scary episode, and all spent the night in the same house. Woke up next morning to a gas leak that nearly killed us all. There are more things in heaven and earth, as Shakespeare quoth. Best not to dabble. Thanks for popping by. Viv
Date: 5/24/2015 7:06:00 PM
This was mesmerizing and held my interest from the creepy start to the foreboding end. Well written, and excellent plotline. =) Easy 7 for this one.
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Date: 5/24/2015 10:10:00 PM
Thanks Preston, I don't normally do dark. Appreciate your valued input. Regards, Viv
Date: 5/24/2015 6:42:00 AM
This is one of the best poems that I've read today. There is a powerful dark side to it. Will we be seeing Lucy's poster up next? #7 // paul
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Date: 5/24/2015 6:47:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I appreciate your comments- yes, I liked the idea of the full circle ending to it, the possibilty of future peril. The dark hours can be quite conducive to poems like these. May have to sleep with the light on in future :) Regards, Viv
Date: 5/23/2015 11:36:00 PM
Hi Viv, this is deep, a horrible situation. The poem was gripping right after I read about the 2 missing girls. Enjoyed.... SKAT
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Date: 5/24/2015 12:03:00 AM
Thanks, SKAT, no idea where it came from, I just woke up at 1:00a.m, switched on my cellphone and scribbled it down. Must stop eating cheese before bedtime. Viv x

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