Get Your Premium Membership

Poortown

I grew up in Poortown A mile down the road From hard topped streets Where Miss Eleanor lived She sat on the front porch Smoking ready rolled Eating brought on peaches And she would hide in back When she took a dip of snuff She wore nice dresses With zippers on the side And her stockings both Had seams and no holes Her shoes were shiny As a brand new nickel Miss Eleanor was not poor And she made it a point To let everybody know it She always had a new Cadillac car to drive And the sweetest smelling French perfume… I was just a boy when she Called me in her yard one day Told me how she watched me In my ragged old overalls Passing by her gate each day She asked me how a boy With no visible means Could afford to go into town Most every day and stay From morning till dusk She had no understanding How life really was in Poortown So I told her best I could The particulars of my day How Pa was sick in bed And my Ma had passed away I told her I was working for For the wealthy folk in town For my dinner and to get my Pa His medicine he had to have It felt as though she had A special kind of glass That she could use to look Right on through my lie Made me feel so small and petty Then she told me not to go Into town anymore But to come to her house And I would work for her I show the next morning To a brand new pair of overalls And some shiny Brogan shoes Not new but unlike any I’d ever had She took me to the back yard And gave me tasks to do I worked as hard as I could Just to make a good impression Miss Eleanor brought some iced tea To the settle in the shade Under the old apple tree Where we began to talk All about life and our lot in it I learned from her and she from me And when the day was over And she paid me from her purse For the work I had done And not a penny more She told me plain that the Money I had earned was mine And mine alone and if my Pa Wanted his “medicine” he’d Have to work for his own Same as I did for mine Years passed by and I grew up Miss Eleanor is gone on now But she left me all she had Which to my surprise wasn’t Very much… You see she believed That appearances could hide a Myriad of deficiencies from Prying eyes, but not the heart She taught me while appearances Were important they meant Little in comparison to character Honesty and integrity… So I sit here on the front porch Smoking ready rolled cigarettes Enjoying a brought on peach Watching the endless parade Of poor and destitute young’uns I think back to the days When I would pass by and Imagine the mystery and beauty Inside this little stone cottage And who Miss Eleanor really was… I like to think when she passed away That she passed down a little Of herself to me…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/6/2014 4:19:00 PM
W.L., Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 1/5/2014 7:06:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, W.L. ! - A very well written story/poem - Like it a lot !! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2014 8:25:00 PM
W.L. Said, wow.. What a poem... Great story,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs