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Below is the poem entitled POOR LITTLE GUY which was written by poet ANKIT DEDHA. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Call me a poor little guy,
                    a barking little dog...
thought i am a dragonfly,
                   when i was an ugly frog...
I figure out that misty lie,
                   made me feel i've been in sky...
Now let this river wash my eyes........
I was crawling in the mud,
                    i thought i could fly..                  
I asked a flower 
                 to bloom by my side,
To embrace my life
                  with joys and smiles.... 
But he denied and hide,
                 i asked why you shy...
He replied
             -"you are just a poor little guy....
and get away from me,
               i got many reasons to smile".......
It shook me up and i screamed,i cried...
But even the tears won't come out,,wanna know why?
               Cause i am a poor little guy.......
I swear to God,i'll never give up,i'll try
               i'll rise,i'll shine,even in the darkest skies....
I'll prove myself better,
                the finest among the fines....
It might be a stormy sky,
               but spread your wings,
               you've got miles to fly....
They said-'you are a barking dog,
                now they'll know you can bite'......
You'll make them regret their tongue,
                and they'll say why......
I CALLED YOU A POOR LITTLE GUY................                         

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  1. Date: 12/1/2013 6:51:00 AM
    - Welcome to P-Soup, Ankit ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 4:35:00 AM
    Ankiy, I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@