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Pool of Tears

Everybody expects so much from me, I have no clue how to do it. From being a strong, brave girl, I started hiding in my shell. No ring of the bell is changing me. So, I hide in pool of tears , No one cares ro hear They say that every pain has a gain But,where is mine My pool of tears helps me aim higher All we got to do is try Untill we die. There is no paper which is gonna tell my future. (Though it is) I gonna break all the odd, And wish all the gods Understand what I'm going through Being a winner,you have fame Being an upcommer,you feel lame Dont put your head down Dont let your self down As you've come from the pool of tears . Patch up from the torn. Come on get up You have to pack up the tears which came out have a meaning now You are in the pool of tears Let others mind the business of theirs You have to pick up yourself And say I trust myself Don't say you are under rated One day you can be over rated I stay in my pool of tears But I want someone here I will get up and rise And I want to spice up my life We are born to rise Your vehicle with a horn has arrived Get into it and begin your life Cause we still have time

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Date: 10/27/2016 5:14:00 PM
Karthika,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/19/2016 7:50:00 PM
Karthika, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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