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Ponds Edge

One, two Spirits Entwined Side by side Alone Yet together Not identical Fraternal Reflections Images floating Starry skies Pond leaves Debris Covers Bright colors Masking Intentions Rain falling Uncovering Veins of love Stem to tip Floating Stopping Pond's edge Embracing

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Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/15/2017 8:47:00 PM

Kathleen, so lovely, this. There is a lot hiding in its simplicity. I'm glad you took me to this quiet spot. Beautiful in its brevity. Cheers!

Kathleen Kroll
Date: 5/16/2017 8:17:00 AM

Your comments inspire me to continue even when the brevity makes me wonder its value. kathy

Kathleen Kroll

Date: 4/9/2017 11:47:00 AM

Thanks so much, John. I'm so glad you found it meaningful. Your comment is very poetic in itself. I'm not always conscious of the well from which these wirds arise, Yet that may be true of most writing? I've been spending my time on a writing class lately. Hope to post more soon. How are you? I seem to remember your saying that you are working on several...

John Fleming

Date: 4/9/2017 9:06:00 AM

From a very early age I found our local field ponds to be totally mesmerizing! Bright rings of filtered water dazzling with entrapped jewels of glinting sunlight: Cooling havens with their elusive fish and lazing lilly beds...Ahhh happy days indeed! Loved this, Kathleen...Brought childhood memories flooding back! My warmest regards...And all my very best wishes. Your friend - john. :)

Kathleen Kroll
Date: 4/9/2017 11:50:00 AM