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Pondering, of Wandering

Pondering paths of troubled feet In early days of life I greet Prayerfully read of beauty’s feet… Beauty’s feet now pound the beat I now have beauty’s ample time Now I plow closer to the vine For all my time is of Devine To write a poem of nursery rhyme When in doubt, sit not and pout Seek Love’s face, find things out Love is what life is all about Sitting under Master’s spout

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/17/2011 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "You Choose Again" contest Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2011 6:24:00 PM
lots to ponder, maybe feate? line 3? light& love
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Date: 11/15/2011 9:37:00 AM
Congrats Moses on another excellent win for this phenomenal poetry my friend..luv..
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Date: 11/15/2011 6:18:00 AM
Great work.Congratulations on your big win,john!
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Date: 11/14/2011 10:53:00 PM
LOvely, john. Congrats on the win!
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:13:00 PM
Uplifting writing as usual John. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/14/2011 3:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this wondeful piece...... Michael
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Date: 11/14/2011 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest John. Well written.
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Date: 11/12/2011 10:34:00 PM
john.. Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA
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Date: 11/12/2011 5:45:00 PM
"find things out Love is what life is all about"----wise words lace the gut of this smooth piece!
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Date: 11/12/2011 4:46:00 PM
Oh, to be a branch connected to the vine getting nourishment and tender loving care by the husbanman..Enjoyed reading this creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2011 2:18:00 PM
Very nice John... inspiring write my friend....
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