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Oh what sheer joy, it was to me to be bounced high upon your knee; to be lifted to the bright blue sky, my two arms outstretched, as to fly. 'Pon your shoulders I view the sea, within your gaze, to climb a tree. to feel my fingers all entwine; within your grasp, my soul life line. To see my world within your eyes; to know you listened for my sighs. How can just one man’s love compare; to the fondness that I found there? How can any one lover vie? Or even dare just to just try to place me firmly on his knee; to lift me up, so I can see? Or perhaps, he would simply ask if this was not to be my task? To plumb the darkest depth within; to light my own spark, and begin. Will I admit and ever find what I’ve sought in another’s mind? Can I stop looking full of sighs for my life in a man’s bold eyes? What sheer joy, I’m sure it will be; when I have learned and I can see; That all I really need to know; I’ll find within , if I just go. See About the Poem please

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Date: 3/19/2014 2:29:00 PM
Good morning on my side of the world my dear friend Deb. I'm stopping by to read once again this great winning piece of yours. Big congrats once again. By the way, i came back also to tell you that the picture about your poem is awesome. I viewed it as soon as the result of my contest was released & I want to thank you for sharing the experience:)))). I also did it in my latest poem entitled Prec. Matrimonial Crystals. So late 4 me to discover but TYSM ;)) love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/14/2014 1:51:00 AM
Debbie, a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:19:00 PM
sweet and sentimental, debbie... 'grats on your well-deserved win. huggs
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Debbie!! ^__^ ..great poem! ..
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2014 9:50:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, a beautiful memory, and yes, it is always within yourself to find him there. Nothing can take away such a tender memory. :)
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Date: 3/13/2014 4:50:00 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, debbie
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Date: 3/13/2014 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations on you win...what a special blessing wonderful fathers are...
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Date: 3/13/2014 3:35:00 AM
:) NICE NICE.. :) i love and miss my dad.. :)
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:57:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Deb. Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 4/13/2009 1:31:00 PM
Hi Deb, I agree with you we're on the same page on our mutual central theme (unless your subject is your biological father but I don't think it is:)). Love your rhyme scheme btw. The rhythm carries me all the way through and was very pleasurable to read. Also, your last two lines have an eiry similarilty to my poem 'Who Crowned You King'. Not surprising since our essential message is identical anyway. I would want you to read it if you have the time. Thanks deb - Yoni
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Date: 2/11/2009 11:05:00 AM
Well my dear, I am guessing perhaps you have done just that, found the spark within you. It sadly often takes a dark journey to find the light. I sense you have indeed found it, and more. I am enjoying your poetry, Thanks for sharing your life. Hugs girlfriend. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/13/2009 2:30:00 PM
you brought back old memories. even single men have little girls a place or two. and it's been so long sense i've held a baby on my knee. but we just had a baby born so it won't be long now. thanks for reminding me how. John H Loving III
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Date: 1/12/2009 1:01:00 PM
NiCe one, I like the line "to be bounced upon your knee"....Maryam
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