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Pollination

As the flowers grow, The Honeybee's land on them; And they spread our needs.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/12/2009 4:21:00 PM

Dear Elizabeth,The Honeybee can not live with out the flowers and flowers without bees I have no Honey Superb Haiku LOVEYOUr POET mind ALWAYS...HG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/22/2009 4:02:00 PM

This is wonderful! I love the images. I'm looking forward to the spring. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Raul is wonderful poet and a good man. Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/16/2009 4:20:00 AM

Love the symbolic meaning. Awesome haiku! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 5:09:00 PM

Great use of imagery, pollination is key for a flowers survival...Raul

Danielle Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 5:09:00 PM

good job! that is good

Date: 1/15/2009 5:01:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. Much said in these few words. Keep on writing! Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/15/2009 2:55:00 PM

very sweet! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Judy Riley

Date: 1/15/2009 1:45:00 PM

Nice imagery, and it is about nature, but a Haiku usually has three unrhymed lines with syallable counts 5/7/5 , you have 5/7/7, a Tanka has five lines that are 5/7/5/7/7. Thanks for sharring Judy Riley