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Polite Pirates

The captain called all hands on deck He said come on lads what the heck Whatever you do when you have to poo don’t leave the loo in such a wreck

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Date: 2/3/2024 7:35:00 AM

Hehe…that should be hung in every public loo…some are disgusting!! How people get poo on walls is beyond me…!!? Debx

Date: 2/1/2024 7:03:00 PM

Haha! A humorous Limerick, Jerry. Even pirates need to have some consideration. Well done! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Date: 2/1/2024 5:37:00 PM

Good one, Jerry. After a while, I'm sure they'd all have to walk the plank.

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:24:00 PM

Ha, great point my friend. Have a great week, David.

Date: 2/1/2024 4:11:00 PM

Good advice and well-written to form, my friend. Write On! Bill

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:23:00 PM

It seemed like it has been a limerick kind of week for everyone, so I thought I'd give it a try.

Date: 2/1/2024 2:33:00 PM

funny Limerick...there's something to be said about being polite in any situation :-) well done, Jerry....have a great evening, Sara

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:22:00 PM

Thanks Sara

Date: 2/1/2024 12:10:00 PM

Ha! I think this probably the case in many a ship full of males..

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:21:00 PM

Not to mention, where was the toilet paper.

Date: 2/1/2024 8:54:00 AM

I suppose sailors do not have proper toilets.

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:20:00 PM

Can't always just go over the rail you know.

Date: 2/1/2024 1:59:00 AM

lol good one Jerry!

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/1/2024 6:19:00 PM

Thanks, Karen. Hopefully, I gave you a chuckle. Have a great evening, my friend.