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Poisoned

lurking in my heart; poison from a black dart potion made from your mistakes, lies, broken promises, cries death seeps in slowly taken its time in pleasure mercy please be on your way i fear the darkness light, come back redemption save us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/1/2011 7:42:00 PM
Although this is short it still protrays a rather sad moment that many may have empathy with. The title suits it because hurt and pain are thought as emotional poisons. Well done, Ashley.
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Date: 6/1/2011 2:13:00 PM
Thought provoking, well done...
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