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Poise, My Dear

The quiver of a lover, Cupid's arrows. How quaint, indeed, this talk of love. You quiver at the question, the proposal. This puts us both in a quandary. A platinum sky, platinum words on the quay one day--they say it's all muddy waters. You say that you prefer PLATINUM to gold? Ah, the smell of money, unlike perfume. A rank smell--a penance for greed. Poise, my dear. Poise. Take the silver ring, please. Written 3/1/21 for MIND YOUR P's AND Q's Poetry Contest Sponsored by Michelle Faulkner Won First Place

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Date: 4/23/2021 11:29:00 AM
This impressive piece truly deserves its First Placement Carol. Belated Congratulations! I have been away from PS for about nine months since the loss of my husband. It is wonderful being back and catching up on some of the outstanding poetry I missed. Blessings
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/25/2021 9:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. I am sorry to hear of the loss of your husband. I do find much inspiration from the poets on this poetry site as we share what moves us and what comforts us through trying times.
Date: 3/13/2021 4:51:00 PM
Dear Carol, I admire your use of intriguing word play and I adore your use of amazing, unique imagery; "A platinum sky, platinum words / on the quay one day--they say / it's all muddy waters." Poetic brilliance throughout and that internal rhyme is to die for! Congratulations for a well-deserved first place in Michelle's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/8/2021 6:12:00 AM
Nice one Carol. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/8/2021 4:17:00 AM
Very nicely done Carol, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/8/2021 4:09:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 3/6/2021 4:13:00 PM
You were well poised for a great placement Carol, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 3/7/2021 8:04:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, and God bless you. hugs, xx Carol Louise
Date: 3/6/2021 9:07:00 AM
Hi Carol, this sly wink at cupid's arrow is so well crafted, especially 'platinum sky, platinum words' - the originality made it stand out, congratuations on your win and thanks for entering :)
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 3/7/2021 8:03:00 PM
Thank you Michelle. I'm so glad i entered the contest. God bless you.

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