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Pointe Coupee Parish

The last living light Twinkles in his dead eyes Alive a moment ago but now gone Someone should shut them A stare so lonely Into a place that only he knew He’s lying there on the floor Bleeding hard from the head Police don’t even bother Just pay him his respects It’s cold and lonely down there Watching life go on Knowing your no long part of it Just a passenger who had made the final stop It may not be where you are going But it’s definitely where you will be Somewhere down the line. As he bled out no one stopped to care He was nobody to them just a drifter But even a drifter has a mother somewhere His mother would have cared Take him sweet Jesus and show him the way He hath walked with the devil and a sawed off shotgun Wrecked the lives of plenty a poor boy Down on the wharf along the shore Somebody cover him till darkness falls Then we will carry him to Pointe Coupee parish Across the river And find his next of kin Put him deep in that black gumbo And let the devil do his work For John Batiste was a man Who needed no help They’ll be frying up cracklin’s At JP’s on Saturday night Someone will crumble a beer can And cuss John Batiste.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/20/2013 6:56:00 PM
"But even a drifter has a mother somewhere" ...I love that line. I love the whole thing. WOW. Impressive composition Mister Kilmer! Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 10/20/2013 7:13:00 PM
Thank you. From a place far far away and from a time. Almost 30 years ago it took this one to surface...a Alway ~Kilmer
Date: 10/20/2013 9:49:00 AM
There you go again Stephen, touching the most lonely piece of my heart. No death parade for this unfortunate. Just wide open eyes with no one to shut them. 'Just a passenger who had made the final stop It may not be where you are going But it’s definitely where you will be' Great.
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 10/27/2013 3:13:00 AM
Thanks Kathy, You seem to be so in touch with what I am writing. You comments are outstanding thank you so much! I hope I haven't hit a piece of your heart that is too lonely! For we all know where the lonely go...~Kilmer
Date: 10/18/2013 12:44:00 PM
Wonderful sketch and I totally relate
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 10/18/2013 6:46:00 PM
What do you relate to? ~Kilmer
Date: 10/17/2013 7:23:00 PM
Strange how society casts aside the unknown in their time of death. I liked the descriptive painting you did with your words...obviously this meant something of worth to you..nice job.Look forward to reading more of your work.
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 10/21/2013 8:31:00 PM
Thanks KJ, I appreciate the comment and kind words. ~Kilmer
Date: 10/16/2013 9:57:00 PM
Another exceptional story. Picturing the poor guy dead with his eyes open and the sad life he must have lead. All the detail you put in this made it rock ! Is John Batiste a real person?
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 10/17/2013 6:30:00 AM
Thanks Karen. He is a fictional character but could be any of several people I met in that part of the world.

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