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Gently their world now breathes fresh life into a dormant winter’s heart; for behold the leaves are rife with fragrance, zest and strength to start their lives anew as hopes impart. His arms, her eyes unfurl a wing unhurried. She reveals her face; a thousand blooms that are hiding suddenly opens an ice-chilled place, when vows reseal pale love with grace. From cold nights, one lesson they learn... burying faith down to the ground is trite. A point of no return from chains they refuse to be bound, affirming to stay... godly crowned. Point Of No Return Contest 12/10/2016 Sponsor: Nicola Bryne

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Date: 12/15/2016 6:37:00 PM
Nette, you are a winner! Congratulations on your top billing. A beautiful poem. ~ Sonia
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Date: 12/15/2016 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations Nette :)
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Date: 12/15/2016 4:46:00 PM
Congrats!!! nette...beautifully done my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 12/11/2016 2:27:00 PM
Lovely, Just lovely. The words so carefully chosen and well put together. Loved it. If this is for a contest it's a winner for sure. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/10/2016 1:03:00 PM
Your words sIng in a salute to the inspired Nette. This is wonderful! I loved it. A fave my friend! 7 ; )
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Date: 12/10/2016 8:25:00 AM
This is so poetic!
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Date: 12/10/2016 8:23:00 AM
Lovely poetry...Beautifully expressed. ...Fran
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:23:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Nette. It is nice to have time here tonight How did YOUR Friday go?
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Date: 12/9/2016 5:04:00 PM
There's no turning back when love finds that chance to redeem its grace. Impeccable poetry that moves me deeply!
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Date: 12/9/2016 4:39:00 PM
I can smell them already, nette. Such beautiful poetry:)
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Date: 12/9/2016 4:15:00 PM
Perfect nette...I really like it.
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Date: 12/9/2016 3:51:00 PM
What a lovely poem, Nette! And good luck.
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