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Poignant Passage

Twisted trail of opportunities to grow, progress, change, to gain lifes' meaning. Adversity builds character, a character once proclaimed after learning all their pain was past, as grist for a mill. Past? Past to ... bread? When life hands you lemons and you make lemonade, do the nickels mean more than those thrown in the hat of the corner beggar? Better to give than receive is said as lifes' curtain comes crashing upon the dead and our collective ... why? as an eye to write it all pretends to the realm of poetess feeding a need that will surely furnish the landfills of today or the cyberspace of tomorrow and tomorrows' tomorrow. Only a distant bird passing by drifting clouds holds a promise of meaning in this madness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2010 4:43:00 AM
A wonderful write Sue...Jotting down thoughts, to me, is what creates an absolutely poignant write.... I am very sorry I haven't sent you that email...I will be doing that tonight..btw... they changed our MUN topics..I'll let you know all about them =) Farah
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Date: 3/22/2010 11:34:00 AM
Interesting poem for the reader to ponder about. I've already read it a few times. Fitting title. Nice use of alliteratioin. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 3/22/2010 9:25:00 AM
Amazing Sue. Always a pleasure to see and read your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 9:23:00 AM
Enjoyed the read..Have a good day...
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Date: 3/22/2010 8:59:00 AM
Great write! love Simone
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Date: 3/21/2010 7:20:00 PM
Surely, you're not "a distant bird," Sue. You seem so in touch with everything happening around you and I understand that we think the meaning of life will become clearer as years pass. Unfortunately, I see more and more questions and fewer answers. Awesome poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/21/2010 6:27:00 PM
a gorgeous flight of dreams, Sue! nice work! jamesy
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