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Poignant Haiku

spring dream a rooster stirs the stillness into dawn distant hill a river carrying the spring rolling out of the rice fields – remaining snow spring’s end my infant fingers the fallen petal sun bath an eagle circles the day moon autumn dawn -- mother serves white rice on an almond leaf autumn sky patches of twilight in the falling leaf

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Date: 8/21/2013 1:23:00 PM
i like the river carrying spring. I know this image very well. beautiful beautiful string of haiku. The ending one's my favorite... xox~ SKAT
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Date: 8/11/2013 5:14:00 AM
- Very nice haiku, Ramesh ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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