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Poetus Interruptus

There are few things so inspirational As my morning caffeine and constitutional Pushing chlorinated water or pavement behind Puts a golden charge straight into my mind That talk to text feature is my salvation To throw down verse while in motion Write it down, oh yes I’d better Before it gets eaten by the Forgetter Yet every day, to my frustration Responsibilities loom, to block expression See, it turns out my family likes to live indoors And not eat crumbs of old food off the floor So it’s a race through the shower, off to work Without a moment to hesitate or shirk Work in temporary order, brief reprieve Put more verse on paper before it leaves If only the pager would give it a rest I’d have the time to throw down my best But I won’t be retiring for a decade or three So this is how inspiration works for me 3/25/16

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Date: 5/4/2016 4:46:00 PM
Haha, yes! Especially line the about the Forgetter. I can relate to the struggle, and a very real struggle it is. Wouldn't it be nice if there were a way to just write whatever you want, whenever you want, and still pay those incessant bills? Thanks for sharing the link to this on the blog, this was a fun read. -G
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/4/2016 9:30:00 PM
My pleasure! I'd play the lotto, if it weren't a total waste of $$$...
Date: 4/1/2016 5:44:00 PM
Tom, I'll write in the palm of my hand if I had to, in order not to loose that thought. All in all, it great exercise of the mind we go through... therapeutic no less.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/1/2016 8:23:00 PM
Absolutely. Keep it flowing!
Date: 3/29/2016 9:26:00 PM
Ooh I love this one, Tom. Super relate-able! I swear I become like a zombie when inspiration hits ... can't concentrate on normal things ... "See, it turns out my family likes to live indoors And not eat crumbs of old food off the floor" ... great witty sarcasm ... A++ on a very memorable title, too!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/30/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy! If only life would cooperate with my hobby schedule...
Date: 3/25/2016 11:05:00 AM
Inspiration comes at the dandiest of times~I'm being sarcastic. lol I've had many bouts with the Forgetter, but he usually wins. Great take on the frustrations of being a poet, Tom.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/25/2016 10:42:00 PM
Thanks, Lin!
Date: 3/25/2016 10:13:00 AM
Amasing Couplet (brave rhymes: frustration -expression,reprieve- leaves) and high inspiration. Congrat.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/25/2016 10:42:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Ovidiu!

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