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Poet's Hurdle

Stare vacantly at nowhere Almost beyond recall Chase the string of flea in ear With hopes and iron will Almost beyond recall Words seem exhausting With hopes and iron will Let the journey keep going Words seem exhausting Unravel its quandary Let the journey keep going Face the uncertainty Unravel its quandary Chase the string of flea in ear Face the uncertainty Stare vacantly at nowhere 03.20.17 Song: "Wither" by Dream Theater 8th Place "Pantoum Form: What Will tomorrow Bring" 3rd Place

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Date: 7/4/2017 8:26:00 PM
Moon Flower, thank you for entering my contest, congratulations on your win ~*
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Moon Flower
Date: 7/6/2017 4:28:00 AM
Hello there Eve! Thank you the placement! :)
Date: 4/26/2017 6:11:00 PM
Big congrats to you in Rob's contest. I enjoyed how the lines were short and not super long ones! Great way to do a pantoum
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Moon Flower
Date: 4/26/2017 9:35:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Andrea. :)
Date: 4/18/2017 10:45:00 PM
Congrats & thank you for supporting my contest.
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Moon Flower
Date: 4/20/2017 10:32:00 PM
Thank you for the placement, Rob. :)

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