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On a page, I'm designing a little nursery. It will typically be a splendid moon. Dreams I'm putting to witness bursary. The space portrays a pearl, strewn. The trail winds its way to this point. Each day I assess my plant's progress. Such as the gleaming white anoint. Radiant as the full moon's keenness. You bring forth my sheerest strength. I overfeed them till they reach maturity. Like I come upon a pearl in the depth. Joyous colors reveal a touch of clarity. But have acquired a wind and flown. Believe your spirit will be revived. I'm still sowing poetry, yet age has grown. To sustain a nice cuddle for you're altered. A far source of fuel with words I lack. With love and faith, you're on a deft track.
5TH PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: April 13, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 4/19/2022 8:13:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. You have doubled up for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the nice comments. Sara
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Date: 4/14/2022 11:14:00 PM
"I'm designing a little nursery" - yes, very beautifully designed. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/14/2022 11:07:00 PM
A star poem....loved it loads and congrats on your win Sotto :)
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Date: 4/14/2022 10:01:00 PM
"You bring forth my sheerest strength. I overfeed them till they reach maturity. Like I come upon a pearl in the depth. Joyous colors reveal a touch of clarity."..... Love this third stanza ! Beautiful sonnet, dear friend Lasaad !
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Date: 4/14/2022 7:58:00 AM
This is a great creative poem. Well written Lasaad :)
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Date: 4/14/2022 2:57:00 AM
What a sonnet! I'm jealous with a dead muse.
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