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Poetry Soup, an Outstanding platform, provides space and Elevates the poetic talents of nook and corner Trustful team of thinkers and their support Rejuvenates the flair for writing both in the Young and those who are young at heart Stupendous family of poets is your possession Offering ovation for bringing us together. A Unique dais you are; and our warm wishes for Propelling us into the creative world of writing PLACED : 2nd POETRY SOUP BEYOND ITS NAME Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin 05-09-2022 .

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/25/2022 9:27:00 PM

"Trustful team of thinkers and their support" - True. Beautifully said. Congratulations!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/27/2022 7:01:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments!

Jim Slaughter

Date: 9/5/2022 11:45:00 AM

One of the things I like best about PS, and other communities I have been involved with over the years, is just that...a sense of belonging to a community...a family, if you will...of like-minded individuals. A very good acrostic, Patri. May I suggest one thing, however? In Line 7, your word "thy" seems a bit stilted. A simple "your" works much better. BOL in the contest.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/5/2022 9:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my lines. Very glad to receive the suggestion.