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Poetry Revenge

I’ve finally reached my limit My anger’s now - over the top It saddens me that you don’t care You’ve found a way, my words to stop What makes my words less important You think yourself the answer man You know I’m onto your agenda A fire you feel you must fan Find some other fish to fry Pack your gear and go away For damage done to a poet’s heart You’ve insulted me the last time today Let me tell you, you’ve met your match Yes we could have worked together You never gave me any thought And now its sealed forever Writing stories is your game I don’t hold that against you at all You see telling a story is my goal too So today I had you against your own wall Your jealousy told you - you were special

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Date: 11/4/2015 3:51:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem - I wish you luck with many more poems - A pleasure to meet you here, Don :) - Best wishes // Anne-Lise :)
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Don Ford
Date: 11/4/2015 4:10:00 AM
I was happy to realize I hadn't gotten myself into some HOT SOUP. It feels like a good place, this Poetry Soup! Cheers, Don
Date: 10/30/2015 6:19:00 PM
Hi Don, jelousy is an emotion I understand. Enjoyed the limit reached, :) WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Don Ford
Date: 11/4/2015 4:07:00 AM
I'm here because I can't stop writing poetry and short stories. Apparently my muse NEVER SLEEPS!!! It's starting to feel like home here. :-}Don
Date: 10/29/2015 8:38:00 PM
Don, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Don Ford
Date: 10/29/2015 9:01:00 PM
Thanks for the old fashioned pat on the back. Glad to be a member here. I have questions but they can wait. Cheers, Don

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