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Poetry Planets

There was a time that I never wrote
Like in the dark days
before creation
I spent my days in whirling hazes
of service and devotion
to others-
but all this moment-by- moment
emotion- spun out
like a galaxy forming planets
And now in quiet contemplation-
I get to name them

Suzanne Delaney

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  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:13:00 PM
    Out of this world...suz!!! Your mind is amazing!!! Unusual way of connecting the two,,, really enjoyed reading thankyou4 sharing:)...cherie

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:38:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Suz, wow! emotions like a galaxy, now that is the images of all images... i love the way you sprung this poem up. i like the gravity, you have and control, if for some reason you see an awesome planet, that looks like Venus, please name it PD... lol... Jk... love it! love it! xox LINDA

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Wow!...This is a true mind blower, SuZ!...The way you connect poetry with the universe is amazing...My theory is that the song, poem, etc. has always been out there, just waiting for us to pick up the signal and make it our own...Great verse! - Tim

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 10:12:00 AM
    Suzanne, your thoughts are always so interesting and unique. Though the times before I wrote is my childhood years full of wonderful memories, I too, refer to them as the "dark days". There's something about putting names and words to feelings that you feel you can better understand them... and enjoy them for long times to come, well after the feelings have long passed. Amazing title, btw!

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 1:27:00 AM
    This is awesome! These are some fun thoughts!

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 1:53:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Poetry is great way to express oneself..Sara

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 1:17:00 PM
    This is incredibly clever....and spacey! Love it, Suz...

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:33:00 AM
    WOW, this one is so cool! I love the matephor - and that title is such an eyecatcher. You are one talented lady!

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 6:05:00 AM
    This is great, we truly are the creator of Worlds. One of the first jobs God gave us was to name the animals. Now we can apply those skills to our writing.

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 12:46:00 AM
    It is indeed a blessing to add our own sense of reality and meaning to what we perceive around us - and the way you have done / are doing through your poems are creating beautiful names which add meaning to the ordinary. I always enjoy your imaginative creativeness, SuZ. Thanks for sharing... David