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Poetry Keeps a Day

Poetry will not keep you warm Not like a cat nestled between legs But, it hunts down manic thoughts Gnashes the static till the mind gives Chases a thought till claws are bloody Keeps you drenched in sweat Yes, she mews for attention Till its cries grate every nerve Till I feed it words & want Poetry keeps me squirming Caught in a net skimming a deluge Waiting for words to be hauled The big catch ever escaping Keeps me checking the line Insisting I jump into cold waters Foolishly like Ahab chasing a tail Sadness is my white whale Mad with promises holey Poetry is a leaky bucket Catching the rain of words Within depression's storm Coming like a cat with a pail Impossible and torrential Ensnaring me for an hour Keeps me back for seconds Promising an easy catch Cold and slippery

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Date: 5/4/2024 8:29:00 AM
Dear Triny, I am enthralled with your beautiful use of metaphor and engaging wordplay. A captivating piece that captures the gnawing, elusive sometimes brutal process of creating poetry with vivid emotion, vibrant imagery and pristine poetic finesse. A sumptuous display of your poetic gift. A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Triny Xiang
Date: 5/6/2024 4:38:00 PM
Dear Susan, I'm tickled with what you've dredged up in sepulcher of my words. Your cat has dragged in such compliments to pretty on my shelf. I hope your muse terrifies words into submission. Thank you.
Date: 4/28/2023 10:29:00 AM
Wow! You know what you're doing - I shall follow you immediately. Great poem!
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