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A new love who comes to me underground Over hill even swims mighty river Under the ocean waves to me he bounds Joy to my meager life he is giver Giver of joy, warm fuzzy feelings wait sound Of email ding_note it will deliver Disappointment comes when no news from love Waiting for romantic poetry from dove When with him, his loving emails are pearls The tension melts and our spirits entwine Can't wait to meet face to face soon we'll twirl When alone all my heart does is to pine It pines for you alone _your hair in curls When with you I know I'll have heart that shines Email ding open what a lovely gift He is coming on midnight plane_heart lifts Soon be in his arms not XOXO on paper Watching and waiting at the airport sigh Over intercom excitement damper Call to come to information desk_cry Cry, cry, and cry _terrorist did tamper Won't see love after all spirit bone dry Heartbreak agony ripping my heart out Can't see for tears flowing without a doubt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2010 5:06:00 PM
Very sad but I enjoyed the read, good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 12/11/2010 2:06:00 PM
goose bumps Sara... a remarkable story of love and loss. I felt like i was on a roller coaster ride. beautifully done but so sad.
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Date: 12/10/2010 8:17:00 AM
I was rolling with this one dear poet, until your last stanza...it stopped me in my poetic love bursting tracks !.. which to me makes a great write Sara...a great write, though sad the ending! much love, james
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Date: 12/10/2010 5:29:00 AM
It is current love steeped in deep passion,Sara.Very interstingly,I read it.I think real experience inspired you write this.Love is loved by everyone.
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Date: 12/10/2010 4:04:00 AM
SWEET AND EMOTIONAL, AN ELERGY LIKE CANDY. LOVE, LIGHTENING INK.
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Date: 12/9/2010 10:14:00 PM
Very interesting SARA, sad as well*SKAT
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Date: 12/9/2010 7:13:00 PM
HOw sad, Sara, it reminds me of that country song where a woman is waiting to marry a soldier and then she is stood up at the alter because he was killed overseas. I sure wish my mind remembered titles!! anyway, very interesting write. Best of luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/9/2010 6:48:00 PM
truly an emotional and sad poem with the ending,,I sincerely hope this was not for real,,if it was all my heartfelt thoughts are with you and your loss,,I hope and pray that this was just your muse,,and I do want to Thank You for all your visits to my word and for all your words that you have left behind,,,Blessings..cecil
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:01:00 PM
Lovely but sad poem indeed. Thanks.
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Date: 12/9/2010 3:08:00 PM
SOUP MAIL..Sara..
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Date: 12/9/2010 1:45:00 PM
It seems I missed the begining but this is very sad Sara. So relevant to today with home-grown terrorist in our midst. Love is never loss though..but it's just my opinion. Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/9/2010 1:44:00 PM
You went from happiness to sadness so quickly when you heard the announcement, Sara. A timely poem right now as we all fear terrorism. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 12/9/2010 1:07:00 PM
Oh no, I wasn't prepared for the sad ending, Sara, but I'm sure there have been lots of loved ones left crying at airports when terrorists take action. A beautifully written poem with such a sad ending. I'm sure this will do well in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2010 12:36:00 PM
a rare treat from beginning to end, sara.. very contemporary and so alive in mood and tionality.. best winning wishes in the contest... thumbs up! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/9/2010 9:45:00 AM
I want to know how this story ends!
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Date: 12/9/2010 9:29:00 AM
Gee, it's frustrating waiting for the "Giver of joy" to send a heartwarming email, Sara. Let me know when your poem is finished; I can't wait to see if he sends the much-awaited email! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2010 7:44:00 AM
Expressions of sincere luv and intense feeling Sara.. awaiting the continuation my friend. with luv.. SOUP MAIL..
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Date: 12/9/2010 7:28:00 AM
Hello Sara, Will be waiting, love the beginning Have a wonderful day! As Always, Shar
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