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Poetry In Motion Challenge To You Audrey

God's compassionate faithful prayer family vows lifeless obsidian stars betrothed. Impervious aquamarine crescent moonlight kiss awestruck azure sky. Life elation spirits passion beyond desire, joy, love. Hope petals calm hot kindred bliss. World peace havens light melody. Northern turbulent winds wave lilac freedom clouds. poetry in Motion : Audrey Carey....Tag you're it! use the same words.

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Date: 1/4/2010 6:24:00 PM
great rise to the challenge Marty! Like the last 2 lines especially. Thank you -Robert
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Date: 1/4/2010 5:16:00 PM
Seems you have answered the Poetry In Motion challenge so very eloquently! Love the powerful message it conveys! Thanks so much for sharing! Have a blessed day~Mary
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Date: 1/2/2010 9:57:00 PM
Love the opening line. Good use of imagery to convey your thoughts. I like the idea of "hope petals." Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Happy New Year! Karen
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