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Date: 5/15/2016 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, David! Very creative, explosive and inspiring senryu! ~ Regards // paul
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David De La Croes
Date: 5/16/2016 2:05:00 AM
Thanks, Paul, and congratulations on your awesome winning work! Cheers, David
Date: 5/15/2016 5:23:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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David De La Croes
Date: 5/15/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine, and congratulations to you, too!
Date: 5/14/2016 5:55:00 PM
I loved the alliteration and how you got three rhyming words into this one while keeping it still very senryu! Love it. Congrats in my contest.
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David De La Croes
Date: 5/15/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thank you for the contest, and your kind consideration of my work, Andrea! Greetings, David
Date: 5/9/2016 1:53:00 PM
A delightful haiku James.
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David De La Croes
Date: 5/10/2016 2:14:00 AM
Thanks for visiting, Lenny. Yeah, sometimes even I forget my own name! Cheers, David
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 5/9/2016 1:54:00 PM
Oops - David is what I meant to write.

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