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Poetry joy magic miracles moon spoon delight compassion’s lighthouse scribes verse and ballet love poet trees in motion white purple rainbow’s rhapsody flows up downstream feeling’s roundabouts embraces pure passion circular with joy... Syllables per line 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Total # syllables 55 Total # lines 10 Total words 32 24th July 2016

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Bl Devnath

Date: 9/5/2016 9:57:00 AM

Beautifully you have written poetry. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Tom Quigley

Date: 7/25/2016 5:31:00 PM

Love it. It feels like the inspiration builds and swells throughout.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/26/2016 5:18:00 AM

Thank you Tom. I even know what an etheree is now and can experiment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2016 5:30:00 PM

beautiful imagery. This is sure to do well!!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/26/2016 5:17:00 AM

Thank you for that encouragement Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2016 12:53:00 PM

I can feel the inspiration your are expressing in your poem Kai. Very lovely! ; )

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/26/2016 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Connie. i am sort of finding a new niche in my life with poetry. And sharing it with you guys on the soup is awesome. I am not writing just for my own in the garden shed anymore...