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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2009 2:05:00 PM

Got it right here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 12/29/2009 10:59:00 AM

Exactly! Wonderful Senryu, Raul. I find this form difficult and must work on writing one soon. Thank you for sharing.Also, I wish to thank you for all your kind comments and support over the last year. Best wishes to you in the New Year. Lainie.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/27/2009 10:18:00 AM

Raul~ Well said, you captured the true essence of a poet! Love Laura :) Happy New Year!

Brian Strand

Date: 12/27/2009 12:45:00 AM

Praise the Lord for it Raul.Hapy New Year.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words

David Byrne

Date: 12/26/2009 9:52:00 PM

The joy of commentary! Nice one.

Date: 12/26/2009 6:36:00 PM

What a wonderful message in this one. It's the everyday people that seem to communicate on a level everyone can understand. Keep up the good writing! Happy New Year! Karen

S. Michael Fuller

Date: 12/26/2009 6:18:00 PM

Thank you for your encouragement Raul. Isn't this work of yours a beautiful statement about what we try to do in our daily lives, and our poetry.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2009 6:10:00 PM

Amen Raul... no truer words were written that I can recall.. great write... enjoyed... blessings...luv.. Linda-Marie..