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December-26-2023

Short Form Poetry x 3 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Chetta Achara

(A combination of Sijo, tanka and haiku) When beige and snow-white clouds collide and coalesce in the sky. When wild geese high in the air make V formations and fly away My imagination beckons me to pen down my thoughts. sweet music fills me. unable to contain it, it spills forth in verse. into paper, flows my whims, cloaked in lovely rhyme and rhythm. consummated thoughts, the rapture of soul in art~ poetree yields sweet fruits!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2023 10:03:00 AM

Splendidly poetic, Valsa. I am sure it's a winner

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2023 7:16:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Your visits to my page add a different dimension. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/27/2023 3:22:00 AM

Oh my, this is one of the best takes I've read for the contest, dear brilliant poetess.. This is going directly in my FAVs.. Wow! I love the flow and beautiful cadence of your pristine phraseology here, along with such unique imageries like"When beige and snow-white clouds collide and coalesce..When wild geese high in the air make V formations and fly away" I can't help but feel intrigued by your vivid thoughts that capture poetry in such a gorgeous essence..a magical combo of sijo, tanka, haiku

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/27/2023 3:24:00 AM

Also, the mellifluous ambience created here is so enchanting, absolutely mesmerised my heart, especially with that lovely haiku that expressed it all in a profound manner.. Sending you best wishes for the contest, this should do very well. Love & light to you, always :)

The Situation

Date: 12/26/2023 6:37:00 PM

Yes it does. And having a muse gives us a connection to nature, God, Emotions. Life. Others. It's our way of thanking existance.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/26/2023 4:13:00 PM

your three forms flowed together beautifully, dearest Valsa! I delighted in how your imagery captured 'poetry.' This is a masterpiece and one I must fave.

Jay Narain

Date: 12/26/2023 9:51:00 AM

Nice one. Best luck in contest.