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I don't know that poetry needs be anything but poetry, while myself realizing that definition greatly varies – but I have seen acrobatic words that flop like wingless birds, and predictable political soap-boxing – not my vote if lacking a fine musical note, with a rose in the orator's hair for those, like me, who otherwise wouldn't care – aside from all else poetry should be beautiful first, even when the subject is misery, poetry having ability to spiritual transcend yet purely gymnastics does have a poetic flair and politics has its tuneful trumpeting elephants and rhythmic donkey braying, though written mostly for whoever is paying

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Date: 7/5/2023 5:37:00 PM
Make it beautiful in its prettiness or ugliness. Make it poetry! :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/7/2023 9:30:00 AM
Brava! Well said -- perfect!
Date: 7/1/2023 9:35:00 AM
Great work Joe! Yes, poetry means different things to different people. For me, there has to be a deep expression of the poet's feelings delivered with a certain amount of intensity that can trigger emotion in the reader...and I'm beginning to sound a little pretentious so I'll stop there :) Suffice to say your opening line sums it all up perfectly for me: "I don't know that poetry needs be anything but poetry.." Yes! I'm off to read this again. Cheers - Gary.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/5/2023 7:35:00 AM
For sure; the reader immediately becomes aware if the work is a living extension of the poet, having intensity, honesty of emotion. Great comment, Gary. Thank you.
Date: 6/27/2023 4:41:00 AM
Good Morning Joe. Yes poetry should be of beauty and emotion even when expressing darkness. I agree. I always thought poetry expresses positiveness in some way even when stating loss or sadness. It was a pleasure turning to your page and entry. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying the true meaning of poetry. Take Care. Blessings (smile)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/27/2023 10:17:00 AM
Hi Lisa; I think your collusion is a valid, profound observation. No matter the subject, if poetry does not express Verse's subtle transcending spirit of deeper, often indefinable beauty -- most ethereal when far too vague for common surface definition...yet vividly felt, there in the soul of a work...tacitly if not overtly uplifting despite the even desperate nature of the subject -- if such beautiful spiritual enigma is not present...then it is not the best poetry has to offer. Blessing my friend.
Date: 6/26/2023 2:49:00 PM
There's wisdom in them there words, Joe. Good for us to hear. I think of poetry as the way I allow others to see,hear,and feel the toughts of my heart and soul. It's communicating through heartfelt emotions and intellect. Blessings my friend, Bill
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/27/2023 10:25:00 AM
Thank you, Bill; oh!--only if I felt as wise as I am:) Blessings my friend!
Date: 6/22/2023 6:22:00 AM
poetry should be beautiful--I agree my friend. Much truth and wisdom in your ending stanza, Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/22/2023 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay; blessings!

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