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Poetic Thoughts

As far as my mind goes, I see nothing but poetic thoughts, with me indulging in her dark big brown eyes,her skin smooth and tasteful as the essence of an African chocolate, I see her smile as the sunrises, Which reflects her beauty & strength, Her hair as black as charcoal, Scented with the natural herbs that grace the Fields of Africa, Her lips inviting and juicy, her body carved perfectly by the hands of the Almighty, In the shape of a co-co-kola bottle, Showing her true freckles which shows her courage, Her conversation is refreshing as the water falls of mount Kilimanjaro, Her sense of humor lets me know it's okay to keep in touch with yourself Her presence gives birth to love, Asserted with elegance,her hands on my shoulder assure me being romantic is vibrant then she asked me,do you want to jitter- bug(dance)with me,thats when I realized It's all just my poetic thoughts of Love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/27/2008 9:28:00 AM
I love it...great writing...I can't jitterbug either...Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
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Date: 12/27/2008 7:54:00 AM
Almost like a postcard, the image of her is so real...beautiful write, always, Christy
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