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Poetic PRESCRIPTION:

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Poetic PRESCRIPTION:

                               NO REFILLS---Dr. P. Soupenstein
                               Rx *7563287      BEC 11/11/11      
Seems to me,
what you need 
for healing this condition...
is something real
you can feel
to ease this mean affliction

Patient please
accept from me
this poetry prescription:

      ( <_____PUSH & TURN_____> )

Take ONE positive poem
Read ORALLY 2 times BY MOUTH -----
Every 4-6 HOURS AS NEEDED for the pain 

Blues and belly aches will dissipate
resulting in healthy energy gains 

                  WARNING!!!
-Alcohol may intensify the effect of being drowsy 
attempting to read while operating machines... 
will cause you to drive lousy.

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  1. Date: 1/3/2012 8:02:00 AM
    dude, you're keaff man. stylish writting

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 7:44:00 PM
    Joey-Can't believe I missed this one first time around-I love it. VERY creative! LOL about your comment on my poem-I love your analogy about Adderall-very true :)!

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 6:48:00 AM
    This I love. LOL. Write me a prescription PLEASE. Thanks for your comment also. :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 11:44:00 PM
    ps...don't give NIKKO A REFILL>>>>>tell her to go and write some more poetry......ha ha ha ha. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 11:43:00 PM
    Hey I think you need to revise your prescription bottle "poem" to make it child resistant. ha ha. You must be some sort of graphic design artist to conjure this piece of fruity delight. It is wonderful....this nurse says so!! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 11:02:00 AM
    I am jealous! haha I wish I had thought of this! very witty write, JS :) Really enjoyed this write and can I get another prescription??

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 1:30:00 AM
    Quite a funny piece J S, gave me a smile, thanks for the post:)

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 10:40:00 PM
    Great one! Keep it brewing because this poem is an appetizing brew so far! By the way, thank you so much for doing the effort to commenting on some of my poems; it was very encouraging and somewhat pushy, but helpful! Thanks super stranger! Have a brilliant weekend!

    Earnings Avatar J. W. M. Earnings
    Date: 11/10/2011 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My grammer such, huh? hahaha
  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:57:00 PM
    Clever idea, Joey, and I love your Dr. Soupenstein name.But why no refills for this wonderful drug? Love that push and turn display!! BTW, if you want to understand forms being used, just click above where it says poetry forms for full explanations and examples!

    Mister ROBOTO Avatar JSLambert Mister ROBOTO
    Date: 11/11/2011 12:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ooops! Thx for catching my error of form class!
  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:16:00 PM
    AWESOME poem!!! HAHA Always, Laura