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Poetic Play

Experiencing each of your words so diverse While riding upon your gentle poetic verse How I could live inside each of your lines Emerged into your pieces so well defined Has me wanting to give into you in every way Let me give you a bit of my special poetic play I only wish my very words could compare Wanting to compliment your artistic versed flair You have me loving your poetic verse flow Appreciating all your talent that you show Wishing your perfection would be about me Allowing words to engulf me setting me free It’s in between all of your poetic lines I will lay Seducing me with your own poetic versed play Letting me return it with my play all night long Bet you’ll enjoy what I offer, you can't go wrong 8/16/2020

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John Watt

Date: 9/1/2020 5:14:00 PM

Brenda, this is poetic and playful, and I'm sure a great delight to the poet in question! Lovely writing and I enjoyed the audio as well. Enjoy your day ~ John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2020 5:18:00 AM

John so glad you enjoyed it! Lol I hate my voice but I appreciate it!:)

John Fleming

Date: 8/30/2020 4:37:00 AM

Although it still retains a standard poetic feel to it all, it does have the flavour of a rapping poem -- and who better at rap than you, Poetess! I really do enjoy those "raps" of yours. Excellent collaboration. With warmest wishes. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2020 5:17:00 AM

Ahh John! So glad you enjoyed it!:) you have been missed!:)