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Poetic, Painful, Panic

The Heart Pounds, It's not Mine, It can't Be. It's Unfamiliar. My Chest Expands To A Beat Thats Overpowering. I Don't Understand Anymore. Poetically, Painfully, Panicked. Put My Hand To Your Heart, Slow Me Down. Time Stops. I Have Inhaled Pure, Paranoia Concentrate. I warn you My Heart Will Stop I Can't Make It Through This. Then, My Heartbeat Drops Thank you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/3/2010 5:02:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned...I know that you mean this in an emotional sense but I have been having abnormal heart rhythm for several weeks now so interesting that I chose this one to read...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:49:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Emma. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:34:00 AM
Intriguing write and one that makes my heart beat a little faster.
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