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Poetic Lament

If you say you don’t like it I’ll pull it from the shelf that’s just how insecure I really am Most the time I don’t like it myself if rejection is the slaughter, I’M the "lamb" I need thicker skin to survive this craft I’m in or learn to take the bitter with the sweet If you’re quick to criticize please don’t blame me if I cry and lay my self-esteem down at your feet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/7/2018 8:02:00 PM
The line "if rejection is the slaughter I'm the lamb" rung like a church bell in my mind. Nice poem.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 1/7/2018 8:11:00 PM
..and that's funny because I changed this line a few times
Date: 5/12/2017 10:52:00 AM
I don't think we have to worry about that here, your poetry is fantastic and there is always a message woven within, but you never know. There are those who offer constructive criticism and that is ok, but when someone just passes through and says, "It stinks" well...they can just keep passing through. Nicely done Gayle
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