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In principles of love, there is no perfection - it is not your master, nor are you its slave. In my poetic heaven, muse needs no inspiration. Cradled in my beloved's arms - her embrace gentle and warm, her petal like skin, tender and aromatic. Her nature calms my childhood sorrows, as all fears disappear. This could be my final resting place. Soothed by her angelic fingertips, heavy head heals, resting softly, upon her chest, listening to my name echo from her heart - each beat creates a rhythm of romantic chants. In the deepness of her eyes, I can see the doorway to my soul. Lyrics to a poem not heard before. As our lips merge, through the connection of breaths, we create poetry without words. There is an art to love, sadly not all are artists, so seek the one who inspires your palette. Simple Musing Silent One 4 November 2020

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Date: 12/6/2020 4:48:00 AM
This is beautifully penned!!
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Date: 11/18/2020 9:27:00 PM
Wow. This is beautiful!
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/16/2020 3:50:00 PM
the man who knows analyzes what he reads better when he writes but boy are they too long for me to finish them one shot
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:30:00 AM
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Date: 11/14/2020 7:30:00 AM
Principles of love....so changing.... A lovely inspiring write. How blessed you are, Best, SuZ
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Silent One
Date: 11/14/2020 9:22:00 AM
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Date: 11/12/2020 12:52:00 PM
So lovely! Heaven for sure
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Silent One
Date: 11/14/2020 9:22:00 AM
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Date: 11/12/2020 5:44:00 AM
Silent, a beautiful poem of love, well done _Constance
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Silent One
Date: 11/14/2020 9:23:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2020 5:59:00 PM
She has such a gorgeous nature! She sounds heavenly.
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:08:00 AM
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Date: 11/6/2020 8:04:00 PM
This was so romantic like a fairy tale story. So tender and full of pure love. Anybody who has such a life partner will be surely blessed. First and last stanza very profound.
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Silent One
Date: 11/7/2020 9:24:00 AM
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Date: 11/6/2020 7:59:00 AM
Yes . There is an art to love and HARDLY an Artist comes up. Blessings always. Though you belong to my next Generation, yet I get inspiration from your poem and venture to continue in Poetry Soup with my limited vocabulary in English.
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Silent One
Date: 11/7/2020 9:24:00 AM
You vocabulary is fine.. Thank you..
Date: 11/6/2020 5:25:00 AM
The height of romance bidding an unutterable poem, one trembling in heaven’s ecstasy!
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2020 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Kim..
Date: 11/6/2020 12:20:00 AM
Your opening lines and closing lines just amazing!.. Just awesome Silent One. God bless.. ~ Ani :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2020 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 11/5/2020 9:46:00 PM
"There is an art to love, sadly not all are artists, so seek the one who inspires your palet" Another masterpiece!
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2020 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 11/5/2020 3:47:00 PM
very very beautiful, Silent One!
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2020 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 11/5/2020 1:29:00 PM
Love this so.... I finally received the poetry book with your poems and LOVE them :) God bless you my friend :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 12:13:00 PM
Wow. a masterpiece of poetic art.A lesson in writing great poetry.Well done.
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 1:21:00 PM
Thank you Peter
Date: 11/5/2020 11:38:00 AM
"Not all are artists, so seek the one who inspires you" Sounds like someone has taken your breath away. :) Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 11:47:00 AM
Nope.... No one has ever taken my breath away... I'm sure she is out there though, somewhere... Thanks
Date: 11/5/2020 10:24:00 AM
Another masterful write SO, drawing out the full spectrum of emotions, that's what love does, that's what this poem does!
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 11:49:00 AM
Thank you John..
Date: 11/5/2020 9:04:00 AM
I love the descriptive words you use. This beautiful woman is just a pleasure to watch as this relaxing peaceful music plays, while her beauty is transformed on the canvass. You brought out emotions in me of a previous past. Everything combined is just wonderful my friend. Another favorite...
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2020 2:09:00 AM
If I ever find her, I will let you know.. I've not found someone like this in the physical form....
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/5/2020 4:09:00 PM
"through the connection of breaths, we create poetry without words" This poem is non fiction, but in your mind- this person exits. Simply breathtaking indeed.
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 11:49:00 AM
Brandy I meant the person in this poem doesn't exist, as it's non fiction... I never implied there isn't someone out there for everyone.. Although there are so many single people in this world.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/5/2020 11:45:00 AM
He/She does exist. There is someone special out there for everyone. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Michael, but sadly, she does not exist.. If only...
Date: 11/5/2020 6:05:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your romantic musings about your muse. Very expressive and descriptive work. Thanks for the visit to my page with encouraging words. Sara
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 8:19:00 AM
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Date: 11/5/2020 5:09:00 AM
Vividly descriptive and blissfully romantic, S.O. Janice
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/5/2020 5:01:00 AM
..not your master nor are you its slave Excellent !
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 8:18:00 AM
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Date: 11/4/2020 9:39:00 PM
Well written and so lovely. Pure romance. :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 8:18:00 AM
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Date: 11/4/2020 7:44:00 PM
Beautiful Poem.
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 8:17:00 AM
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:04:00 PM
Beautifully written
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 8:17:00 AM
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Date: 11/4/2020 4:55:00 PM
I love the way you have connected poetry and love in this well written piece, Silent One. :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/5/2020 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Angela..
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