Poetic Gist

Poetry is the air I breathe, lifeblood trickling 'tween luscious marrow in my bones, existentially rooted crux reflecting Amen's utterances & hallelujah certainties 'round reality's technical formalities foreshadowing furthermost prevalence of comprehensive earthy assumptions & defining whispered whimsies, exhaled betwixt sunrise's saturated ache for fiery transpired virtual presence, literally composed of complicit synchronicity resoundingly set ablaze mid expounded otherworldly desires

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/27/2016 4:08:00 PM

Lovely complexities in your visually stunning poem, Paloma. You cover the panoramic scope of emotions/consciousness overlaid on the sensory grandeur of our universe. A very daunting task that was carried out to poetic perfection, at least as far as I could tell. Fabulous writing, lady. Much love to you. RW

White Wolf

Date: 10/26/2016 8:32:00 PM

Tha soup has come alive since your arrival Paloma. And this gem is the reason why. A great piece from a great poetess.

Paloma P
Date: 10/27/2016 4:01:00 AM

What a sweet thing to say, thanks so much Rick!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/26/2016 5:13:00 PM

Hi Paloma, I really enjoyed this write. It was a well crafted piece. You made poetry come alive in a sensual yet tactful way. Although you wrote more than ten lines, if this was submitted to my " poetry "contest it would have most definitely made it on the winning list. Because I felt every word. A without doubt seven:-) Alexis

Paloma P
Date: 10/26/2016 5:54:00 PM

Actually, I originally had that in mind, but I couldn't edit to save my life! :) Thanks so much Alexis.

Chris Green

Date: 10/26/2016 4:52:00 PM

Such a wonderful poem that is so easy to believe after reading much of your work. This may be what poetry is to you but you are poetry to us.

Paloma P
Date: 10/26/2016 5:52:00 PM

You're too kind Chris! Many thanks and look who's talking. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/26/2016 4:26:00 PM

Why don't you tell us how you really feel? Eloquently expressed, Paloma:)

Paloma P
Date: 10/26/2016 4:50:00 PM

I'm not revealing all my secrets Danny. :) Muchas gracias my poetic friend.