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From my very beginnings I have been, Like no other- I have lived in a dream; The joy in life sadly I have not seen, Yet my soul is like a cool forest stream. My writing are fragments- I have taken, From a broken heart that weeps a poem; For each sad sorrow, each I awaken, My life is writing- poetry my home. As a grown woman I am a cool dawn, But there is thunder in my soul- a storm; And with my bleeding pen the words are drawn, Each new line will take on its own sweet form. My nights are dreams and my days are trances, And I spin and weave poetic dances. ____________________ August 19, 2016 Poetry/Sonnet/"Poetic Dances" Copyright Protected, ID 16-819-491-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Mid July 2018 Premiere Contest Sponsor, Brian Strand Fourth Place __________________________ Entered in the contest, Sonnet (2016) First Place

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Date: 7/18/2018 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win, B.W.-- I too often feel this life is but a dream....
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Date: 7/17/2018 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I like this. Your use of words showing great emotion is phenomenal to me. Well done!
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest, Constance - blessings for many more, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 7/16/2018 6:37:00 PM
Broken Wings, fantastic! 'Cool dawn... thunder in your soul" Many a woman can relate to this emotional poem . Congrats!
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Date: 9/3/2016 6:41:00 PM
Wow! Your poem won first place! That is great news. Congrats on the win I rated your poem7
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Date: 8/26/2016 7:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/26/2016 1:26:00 AM
Great win well done!
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Date: 8/26/2016 1:24:00 AM
A worthy win:) Congratulations:)
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Date: 8/25/2016 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations on you placement - Wow a beautiful write.. Keep on writing please. Mark
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Date: 8/25/2016 7:40:00 PM
Such a lovely Sonnet, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your 1st Place win in the 'Sonnet' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/25/2016 2:21:00 PM
A really special write! Congratulations and well earned!..Larry
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Date: 8/25/2016 12:06:00 PM
Poetic dance like no other!Love the uniqueness of your poems Broken!
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Date: 8/25/2016 11:12:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on your win on this beautiful piece... Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/20/2016 8:07:00 PM
Loved it! what a dreamy feel and flow, especially like the spinning and weaving part, dance away fine poetess.
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Date: 8/20/2016 7:47:00 AM
Hi Constance, you certainly do write poetic dances. An excellent write from your gentle pen. One of my favourite forms for reading is the sonnet and i am glad i looked in on this sonnet today. You write poetic songs of such beauty that they always touch the heart so softly. You always place beauty on the page Constance. Your words touch so deeply each and every person that reads them. I join in the dance everytime i do read from you. A seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX.
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Date: 8/20/2016 1:09:00 AM
So beautiful!!! Poetic soulful beauty. I love this write. God bless your poetic soul.
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Date: 8/19/2016 2:53:00 PM
You are incredible. Your words are such a gift. Things have made you what you are or at least left their impression upon your gentle brain. But the words you sew and the way you phrase each thought is just completely immersing. Your poems are fashioned with such love and tenderness. Thank-you for these wonderful moments.
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Date: 8/19/2016 1:33:00 PM
Wonderful write..more more!!
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Date: 8/19/2016 6:45:00 AM
Gorgeous poem BW. This is what draws me to your poetry, your beautiful expression of your deep emotions.
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Date: 8/19/2016 6:22:00 AM
A lovely poem, Constance:) Fave and #7:)
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