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Poet of Love

Some speak of love, others devote themselves to achive perfect love All in the name of love and I write to its well be To love a woman, to hold her, it is like having the world itself in your arms The touch of her skin, the warmth of her lips Walking along the sea shore, seeing the future in eachothers eyes Smell her hair, smell her for love too has its scent Speak to her of her, admire her she is your one and only Don't loose thy trust that love will topple into dust Let your heart speak of the colors that paint the scene Look deeper than what meets your window You will be surprised at what you may find As I lost my reason to dream, be not like me I no longer have anything to smile for I lay down my heart so that you may use it as your mat Kick me now when I drag my body from the mud Drown me in words that break the heart I don't care, I too have a heart of stone It grows colder with each passing night Allow me to say I am the poet whom failed The artist whom lost her canvas I drown in misery and only breathe in failure O' luck will you leave me, leave me to die inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/7/2010 3:50:00 PM
The passion and love touched me Here,Poet Of Love,,Your love is genuine and deep,yet dont let No One use your heart as a mat..You deserve to be loved as you loved Eddie..deep touching,and I know ,you can survive it all...you re too young too die:)Charma
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Date: 12/1/2009 10:23:00 PM
Excellent!
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Date: 11/28/2009 6:46:00 PM
Dear Eduardo, Do YOU think if we hit our stone Hearts together we could create flames of LOVE one for YOU one for me I can relate to this Masterpiece of POETRY ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 11/23/2009 10:09:00 PM
Eduardo, I was deeply touched by your poem tonight... beautiful description of the subject everyone loves ... LOVE...a very passionate poem which will keep me coming back to read more of your creations.. happy u are part of the Soup Family... luv. 2 U ... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extaordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"
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Date: 10/13/2009 5:52:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem tonight although it is kind of sad...Marty
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Date: 10/13/2009 2:36:00 PM
Heartfelt writing, Eduardo. But you don't appear to be one who will ever "die inside." You have too much talent for that. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/13/2009 2:18:00 PM
Very passionate but sad write. Keep writing. Sara
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