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Poet In the Valley

The fresh flowers blooming in the spring sway with the grass to the rhythm of the wind. A little girl runs up the hill, parting a pathway through that immediately gets blown away. All of this happens so fast, so quick. No one notices except for one person who sits in the valley, who makes five seconds last forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/25/2009 7:26:00 PM
What a poet indeed... I love this!!! A true capture of the eyes of a poet such as yourself. -Alley
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Date: 3/24/2009 12:50:00 PM
"parting a pathway through" is a highly pleasing line. Well done.
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Date: 12/5/2008 11:45:00 PM
Kylie this poem is priceless - the ending was simply perfect - To capture a second in time and preserve it is one feeling that writing gives me that I just adore - Great job on this poem - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/5/2008 2:36:00 PM
umm interesting write life in slow motion great write! Laura :
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