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Poems Become Splendid

Poems Become Splendid Reading my impressive poems and what you might do Is send me an elegant comment after you view After each one you have tried to select; Give me thoughts and ideas and ways to correct. Search through my poems than try to behoove, Style and way which I write, I can improve; You can either be macro-viewed or specific; Then I can make each poem become terrific. No one's feelinings would I ever want to hurt; Like when wife hated my dirty, well-worn shirt; After further thinking, my poem I have ended; Tell me how I can make my poem become splendid. PS. Feelinings are for those who are ninnies. Of which I'm sure there may be many's. Wow, an artistic poet. How about that? James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran

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Date: 8/19/2014 8:16:00 AM
Enjoyed the read! Good subject too. Its difficult to give constructive criticism ..feeling get hurt, etc..etc. I guess there lots of ninnies..( including me).Its an art to do it in a kind way...always enjoy your writes. BG
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