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Poem Number 1700

This is my poem No. Seventeen Hundred Gadzooks, that's a boatload of poems Think my brain would have turned to mush Or perhaps I'd wind up in a home Nope, it appears I'm as prolific as ever Have delayed my downhill slide Inevitable as it is, I'm fighting it off still With the help of my blushing bride Still call her honey after all these years I refuse to let time win the battle No matter the years or how grey I get This dude refuses to get rattled It doesn't hurt that I come from good stock Seven siblings lived to seventy or more I tend to overeat, I break all the rules But I'm still winning the damn war So getting back to my poems, let me know If you notice I'm on a downhill slide Sure wouldn't want to embarrass myself After all, I've still got my pride © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 2/7/2015 1:49:00 AM
Jack... I've read a few of your poems and there's a lot more to read yet and you can be rest assured, you ain't done with yet. Your poems are very entertaining... 1700! Crikey - Lindsay
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2015 6:16:00 AM
You is too too kind my dear Aussie friend! There you go with the "crikey" thing again... love it! Big jolly hugs and much love from Canada, Jack xoxox
Date: 2/5/2015 6:36:00 PM
keep 'em coming, jack! no slide for you yet...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/5/2015 7:09:00 PM
Can I add you to the list who are watching to make sure I'm sliding then? Thank you dear Ilene... love and joy, Jack XOXOX
Date: 2/5/2015 11:07:00 AM
1700 poems! Dragon tried to add it and went into a downward slide, to the floor! No he didn't faint, but may before he's done. He's marking 1700 chalk marks in his cave we call a zoo. He decided to make famous Dragon art with concrete in his backyard, but to compete with you it'll be a life time job to think up 1699 ideas more. He sells concrete Dragon footprints, popular where-ever he goes. Now, he wants a Leaning Tower of Dragon, and a splash pool with Dragons through out to touch and hold...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/5/2015 4:38:00 PM
"You've created an artistic, competitive, crazy, obsessed Dragon!" That's a very interesting side effect! LOL XOXOX
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Carol Eastman
Date: 2/5/2015 11:10:00 AM
He says by each of the 1700 chalk marks... he is going to put a picture of each of his creations. You've created an artistic, competitive, crazy, obcessed Dragon!You'll have to write more poetry to give him more creative ideas...

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