Poem From Critique: Cat
I must confess to feeling like a cat
peering at the shadows of fish.
I want to clap my paw through the surface,
and curious,
pull each out
of the trembling waves of light.
from my critique for eckho scott, whose poem may be read here: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/forum/topic7487-critique-please.aspx?MessageID=14459#post14459
Copyright © Jack Webster | Year Posted 2019
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