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Poem Emily Style

I heard a fly buzz by - when I died The air stale - and - bitter Voices heavy - thoughts many I gaze to the ceiling and watch the fly buzz overhead I closed my eyes- final peace - Eternity -

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/20/2009 1:20:00 PM
Super poem Adrian, a warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 9:50:00 AM
Outstanding poem Adrian. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2009 8:34:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Yes, in the end, we hope for eternal peace. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/17/2009 3:19:00 PM
Interesting poem, thought...
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