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My hands are shaking, Today I'll let my mind speaks my soul. We can shut the door in. Feel the warmth of each skin. Light talks, day dreaming. Soothing in my membrane, The echoes of your laugh left in the corner of our house. Unbreakable strength ,a diamond's remnants glow. This is the last hour that we should've missed. Where questions of mind haven't yet revealed. Pull each other hands,lit the fire of love. There'll be no boundaries to me and you. ** 4th place Winner in Charlotte Puddifoot's Contest: ** Get Your Scissors Out: Cut-Up Poems/Word Collage

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Date: 3/31/2014 10:22:00 PM
HI AIYAH, , Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA
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Date: 3/27/2014 8:03:00 AM
Hello Aiyah, A wonderful little poem. I enjoyed reading it. Congrats on your win......Hugs......Roger
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/27/2014 8:12:00 AM
Oh ..you're so sweet and kind, Roger! ..thanks for the comment... I appreciate it much!! ..&__&
Date: 3/26/2014 8:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win Aiyah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/27/2014 8:14:00 AM
thank you so much JosepH!!! ^_^_
Date: 3/26/2014 6:22:00 AM
Very creative to pen a collage poem and congrats on the win, aiyah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 8:05:00 AM
Dr. Ram!!! ...such a pleasure to see your comment... ThaNk you sooo much!!! ^__^
Date: 3/25/2014 10:26:00 PM
Very nice lines....congratulations... well done...
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 8:04:00 AM
ThaNk you so much ,DOnna!!!
Date: 3/25/2014 7:12:00 PM
I thought this was a lovely piece and it had a certain coherence; loved "light talks" and that last line in particular - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 7:59:00 AM
Hi Charlotte... THANK YOU for the placement of my poem in your contest... !!! my honor to be part of your contest... Thank you so much!!! ^__^
Date: 3/5/2014 9:03:00 PM
Hi AiyaH, Your work is always so amazing. I feel as though I am connected, to certain diamond lines, that flow from this poem. luv ~ SKAT ~
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 8:01:00 AM
Oh SkaT.. sorry i just replied this time.. Thank you so much for this wonderful comment!! ^__^
Date: 3/5/2014 4:33:00 PM
A very lovely collage Aiyah....best wishes
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Joseph MAy!!! ^__^
Date: 3/4/2014 2:48:00 PM
† Wow, Your Beauty Reflects, How It Sometimes Feels Inside, Sweet Beautiful Aiyah ˜ When Her Splendour Swims So Freely Yes, Swirling Heights A Golden Swan, Pirouetting, About My Spirit: Deeply ˜ Truly We Can Say That No Feelings Compare Unto, The Euphoria When Twined Of Time, These Two....I Love Your Beautiful Painting ˜ My Love, Always, John
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/4/2014 3:01:00 PM
Thanbk you, John..this will be my entry for "Cut your poems..." ..try to make yours, too.. it's so fun!!! .. ^__^

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