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Poem 2848

Relative time from departure body -- Thus, from Earth we hail. Sailing to Wolf at light-speed tardy, Cryonic-dreams of Dale. Awakened, rudely, at a mere eleven: A technical glitch, a fail. Three years to seven, it's never exact, The crew all burnt and stale. A compulsory note confirms the fact, Twenty-five years until mail. Nothing can dim the sadness I feel, Save for my faraway Dale. Androgynous android without a face Plays chess and laughs so frail. Reprogrammed to simulate the grace Of my beloved, bountiful Dale. Repairs all done -- frozen sleep begun.... A starship commences to wail. Entering Wolf's red-dwarf, m-class sun. Thawed, I recalibrate the ACF sail For low-level orbit around planet 1061. The lander is prepped to auto-bail. Message received at base Alpha Centauri -- Four years to Earth and Dale. A fuchsia sky and gravity-rich mass. I scan for colonists, to no avail. Starlight dining with my android lass, Upgrade face of porcelain-pale. I signal, farm, rave, survive and wait ... for A reply from Earth and Dale. I deflate and weep at the message reaped: She was killed by a rusty nail! On mission eve she planned and weaved, Then cloned her brain to scale. Bestowed to a droid, my darling destroyed -- 'Twas a masterful, Holy Grail code employed. We walk together the newly trail -- Zeke T. and android, Dale....

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Date: 9/8/2016 12:46:00 AM
Great stuff. Twenty five years until mail. Upgrade face of porcelain-pale. Wonderful phrases. (Reading the comments, I was surprised to learn that Dale was inspired by Dale Evans, not Dale Arden.)
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Tom Arnone
Date: 9/8/2016 10:31:00 AM
Yes, Flash Gordon -- I didn't think of that. Thanks, Stanley! I was fascinated by those cigar-shaped, spark-spouting rocket ships when I was a kid....
Date: 8/23/2016 7:43:00 PM
Wow, you have put so much effort, cleverness and imagination into this poem. Poe in the futuristic galaxy! I see your reference to Dale Evans, lol ,.....but my first thought was "HAL" from "Space Odyssey", (male-vs-female). It brought to mind the past and the future! This is a fantastic voyage ! :)
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/23/2016 9:42:00 PM
Thanks, Carrie. Your too kind. :-)
Date: 8/19/2016 6:39:00 PM
this is very sci fi, and very clever way to do the contest. I had a brother named dale who was killed years ago. So when I read that name i was thinking of Dale as a man. It goes great with the meter I recall of Poe's annabel Lee. Oh, I just thought of something. my brother was Dale LEE~~ a fitting Annabel clone.
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/19/2016 8:58:00 PM
I was thinking of that old-timey, western TV couple, Roy Rogers and Dale Evans....
Date: 8/19/2016 12:51:00 PM
- This is really proficient written, Tom - A pleasure to read - Good luck in the contest .... definitely a winning poem ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/19/2016 6:08:00 PM
Well, I'll rely on your intuition and/or clairvoyance, Ms. Smile. Thanks for the tip. :-)

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