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I’m gonna re-write my story
Write it in bold letters on iron tablets
See, the past has been reeling me in too many times
Spiraling me inside it’s vortex like a helpless leaf in a storm.

Nights of tearful contemplations, breathless internal fights
Disclosing and admitting fears embedded within me,
Tonight I’m re-writing my story.

See, I may not have started out clean cut and definite, pre-meditated.
I may not have been of good stock
But I look upon the stereotypes with aghast.
For now the small bits and pieces have been stitched together-
And reinforced with strong seams.

Yeah, I may not spell and say words correctly.
I may not put together colors alright,
But inside; The colors match, the words make sense
Tonight, I loosen this rope

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  1. Date: 12/18/2008 11:50:00 AM
    Ciss, This is an enchanting write -well presented thoughts with appropriate imagery. I am impressed. Thanks also for reading my poem The Gardener and for your appreciation. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 12/5/2008 10:47:00 AM
    Lovely not good at commenting people's poems because i caint realy put out what i realy fill you know? so i just realy love your poem it speeks to me some how....Love:Joanie