Plentitude of Pies

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Two cans Apple pie filling Half cup brown sugar Half spoon cinnamon, nutmeg Half spoon all spices Two cups milk Done! For crust mix bisque and milk to Make dough and roll it. Cut circles by five inch lid Deep fry and heat oil About four minutes Dust sugar Yum! Don’t like cooking? Then buy it All say it’s tasty But mind to eat properly Lest it is messy Pie makes one merry Delicious Pie! If fed up with apple pies Try other fillings Apple crumb with cinnamon Tastier tart cherries Seedless dried grapes Even beef Pies! +++ October 14, 2014 Form: Epulaeryu Dr. Ram Mehta Third Place Win Contest: Plentitude of Pies by Sheri Freshonke Harper

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/9/2014 11:41:00 AM

Plenty of pies for everybody, Dr! I believe you'll make a good cook! Congrats on a lovely win. // paul

Earl Schumacker

Date: 12/9/2014 11:32:00 AM

Hi Dr. Mehta, I like poems with options. I can bake it or buy it. Both are appetizing ideas. Great job Doctor. Great structure and story. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/8/2014 11:18:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/8/2014 2:00:00 PM

Yup baking that crust is not easy it's either too tough or too flakey! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Roy Jerden

Date: 12/8/2014 1:47:00 PM

Sounded like there was a fried pie in there somewhere! My favorite (apricot)! Congratulations!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/8/2014 12:28:00 PM

This was a recipe for success!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/8/2014 11:28:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/8/2014 10:26:00 AM

Dr. Ram Mehta, I didn't get to see your scrumptious picture when judging, boy, it sure adds fuels to the recipe. Thanks for a unusual way of presenting your pie poem. Congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 12/9/2014 8:37:00 AM