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Pleasus

Pleasus How can Jesus please us when all we do is cry about how life has done us wrong when we're the reason why? © ron wilson arbuthnot aka vee bdosa the doylestown poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/23/2015 3:41:00 PM
that is good
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Date: 9/23/2015 5:17:00 PM
Thank you Diane, sometimes short and simple is best.
Date: 9/23/2015 2:00:00 PM
I really liked your poem.
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Date: 9/23/2015 3:04:00 PM
ThankQ Pam, that one was so hard to write, seems the shorter they are the harder they are to finish.

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