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Pleasurethe Melody Gradually Filters

The melody gradually filters Through my being Filling my soul with joy I go with it savouring, anticipating It’s genius – no other thoughts enter Just floating with the melody Surprised by some discords they startle me Prepare me for the majesty of sound to come

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Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/8/2011 1:12:00 PM

Hi Liz. this is a fantastic bit of writing. A cacophony of Mozartic melodies exploding within in that part of us which we call soul. Eamon

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 10/11/2010 2:46:00 PM

Hi Liz-Another beautiful piece.You have the ability to take a simple theme and give it a magic all your own.Lovely! luv June(Sylvia)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2010 11:50:00 AM

Interesting description of music.. Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/25/2010 6:56:00 AM

you speak as one who knows music.john

John Freeman

Date: 9/24/2010 7:16:00 PM

I've never written a pose poem Liz. Looks like they worked for you in this nice poem. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2010 2:30:00 PM

This is so joyful, Liz, a real "pick-me-up" for the reader. Hope those sounds of discord didn't spoil your happiness on this delightful day. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/24/2010 1:35:00 PM

Melodious verse Liz, thanks for your comment on my write. Hope you will enjoy your weekend ;) Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/22/2010 5:24:00 AM

Nice write with nice expressions, Liz

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/22/2010 3:00:00 AM

OOOOOh Liz, this one gave me chills! Music is the calming elixir of the world, yet in contrast also may be the exuberant one that forces feet to tap and move one to the dance floor. I love it! Mahalo, Connie

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/22/2010 2:56:00 AM

So well written, perfect meter and rhyme. Enjoed this melodic poem.